I just CANNOT believe this choppy piece of crap can pass judgment, while my decent flash, gets blammed in 3 seconds, when its WAAAY better than this..
The only real good thing was the fire....and even THAT sucked..
You had quite a lot of nice ideas, but you just weren't able to animate them properly, the best bit was the fire, which actually was pretty high grade in comparison to the rest, naturally you need to practice your movements before your next flash. I'm afraid stickmen made with the line tool don't normally go down well with most people. To hide poorer animation, sound affects are good, that is, if they are done well however.
1. Voice actors
2. some music
3. Sound effects
4. Use Motion tween (instead it being frame by frame, it automaticly drags over)
other than that... it sucked sorry but you tried at least you tried
c`mon guys thats not a ten?
i ll give you a three because you had an idea...
next time draw and animate something...
Actually made me laugh
a 7 cuz it was funny to me plus 3 cuz u deserve it.
his head floated to the ground then his neck caught on fire, rofl.