Nice, very nice.
I liked it, keep going. Ill be looking foward to more. Great job so far.
Author Comments
NOTE - This is no where near finished.
This is just a small clip of something I've started. Timmy and Junior are trouble makers and destroy everything in their path not caring at all. Thats the theme of the soon to be series. Just tell me if you think i should keep with it or what i should change.
for yer level...
it's ok for your beginning level so i'll be looking for more of your work to see it's full greatness.
Good
It's good for a beginner!If you make it longer I would vote 5!
A good start
A good start, waiting to see what you do with it.
So far, pretty good.
It would be a better idea to offer more in the means of a short "preview" so that people would have more to judge upon. But as this is all we have to go with, it's not too shabby. Hope it all comes together in the end. Good Luck.
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Underdog of the Week July 2, 2003