Best of your three
This was the best of your three skate animations. It didnt have as great graphics, but the animation was alot smoother.
But you do have nice graphics in your movies. Keep it up with the drawings!
Author Comments
This animation is my first ever! Please do tell me what you honestly think and leave constructive reviews. Thank you.
Scribbler responds:
You enjoyed this one the most? Hmm, interesting. I have to agree with you, the animation was a bit smoother since this my first animation and I was trying a little bit harder than the next two.
Cool.
Who cares if it's a stick movie or if it's a skate movie. Boo-frickedy-hoo. I thought this was highly stylized and awesome. Ignore all the haters, they have nothing better to do then talk shit about something they aren't. Keep on skatin, keep on animating, your movies rock. Peace. Nicely done.
Scribbler responds:
You know what? I totally agree with you.
Although this was my very first movie, I still thank you for liking it's style and awesomeness. Your review is great and thank you for sticking up for me. I will keep in mind what you said and, rock on!
Potential rolled right through your fingers...
It wasn't bad, especially for someone new to Flash. The sound could have been a little more involved, but the music seemed to fit the scene very well. I was finding myself 'waiting for the punchline' so to speak. I think you could definitely improve upon the movie by adding some indirect danger to the scene. Maybe the sparks ignite some spilled gasoline and burn the photographer? A trail of destruction, usually as an indirect effect of the main character, is usually comic gold. Consider adding something like that to your next movie and you should be very well rewarded!
T.H.
Scribbler responds:
Hey, those are some great ideas and I wish you had contacted me prior to this movie. We could have done something.
This was a long time ago and I don't have plans of making something like this anymore. I was thinking about re-editing this to make it more appealing but that would defeat the whole purpose of this being my "FIRST" flash. It's here, anybody can watch it, and I am glad that many of you enjoy it.
Thank you for the generous review.
Cool
The skating was a bit unrealistic but the graphics and animation were nice and smooth, you should have added some sound effects forthe grinds and stuff thoguh, nice work, keep it up.
Scribbler responds:
Yes, I understand that it was a bit unrealistic but that's what makes it fun! Thank you for liking the graphics. I know I should have added sound effects but this was the very first movie I ever made. I didn't really care about that at the time. All I wanted to do was submit a movie to Newgrounds.
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that was preeeeeeeeeeeeeety cool... could have been and should have been longer...
Scribbler responds:
Yeah, I know but once again, you have to rememeber that this was done while I was still learning how to use flash so basically, I just wanted to have something done because i love reading reviews for my movies. Thank you for the review.