Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
goo
Not Too Bad,
especially considering its size. I thought something that small would be worthless, but I was thankfully wrong. The writing bothered me a bit (Too much vulgarity) but with all the special abilities that the main character had, I figured the gameplay made up for it. A bit short, but if you were to recycle this battle engine and put it into a full-fledged Flash RPG (Complete with towns, dungeons, ect..) you would be on your way to getting a ten.
Good job!
i love it!!!
perfect! sweet,! excellent! extreme! solid! !! and its good to, i love it! i can tell you made kronix by re-coloring and make changes to the chrono sprites, and ya know? they only used there weapons, no magic, how pathitic
Thats the funny thing about Kronik's sprite's. They are based of crono but, I actually drew them one by one with a damn mouse.
Good Music, Good Game
I liked this game. Would of been nice if you could of put some more battles in but it's still a great game and a nice rpg'er battle system as well. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the Crono one.
Nice battle system
This game is a rpg battle system game.
And its..hmmm.not boring...its...GREAT
A definite improvement
It's good to see that you've been able to maintain a solid level of visual and sound quality in your F.A.T.E projects.
I have misgivings concerning your spelling and grammar. I noticed a few mistake here and there in your games introduction, bio and during the fight. Please clear these up so it will not off set any of the themes you wish to express. (Ie; Black Mage says "wasent", "Has an addictive background mostly nicotine and killing from where his alias is from" It's a run-on and a clunky sounding sentence)
As for your story, it is decent for what it is. It's not easy to setup a story featuring a bunch of heros getting into a fight. My only qualm here is that all your characters sound the same. I say this because I find them using the same dialogue. My only suggestion here is that you practice writing more dialogues between two or more people, and eavesdrop on people so you can study how different two people talk. (Trust me, this is what most creative writing teachers will suggest to you before writing dialogues) This will surely make your characters sound distinct and different from one another.
Keep up the work Solomon, this is good work.
*Bring on Crono!*
Thanks for that amzing reviews. I like your style when you review movies/games on newgrounds really helpful stuff.
And yes I can do with out that horrible grammer from time to time. But after writing my damned storyline for F.A.T.E Chapter 2 you will be amazed, (hopefully). I worked alot for these types of responses from people and your review is just so cool, thanks alot. And it made me think alot.