Review: ok your arts not bad it just needs audio, color, and for you to take your time and care about your creation because this looks more like an unfinished product. Advice: first off if you think it sucks, Quote "sorry it sucks first flash", then don't upload it, second if you tell people it sucks then they'll assume it sucks, third don't upload crap (i'm not saying this is crap) just to push stuff out. Take your time 1 well designed flash is better than 10-20 pushed out crap flashes: Quality vs quantity my friend. Im sorry but I don't see why this should be in the flash portal.

I like the animation.

good test, keep working! everyone has to start somewhere

Nice...

if you had to defend it why produce it,even the editings off