umm terribly short. What's more the controls gave me a hard time even though the game is so short. Pointless.

I think you might be onto something. It is an interesting storyline that you could develop. Just needs time.

I don't know what to do, and I think you should add a quick storyline before you get to play so it will inform the player on where they are and how they got there.

there are several exits, one of them should lead to a happy ending i think

This is pretty good, but there's nothing to it. There's no story to it at all, and the game is literally like ten seconds long. It's not really even a game at all. Rather than posting a game that you haven't completed yet, actually finish the damn game.

One thing you can add is obviously a story. I didn't even know what was going on. Maybe an interaction system where you can interact with NPCs. An actual goal to the game. This is really lacking in terms of a game. The art and animation is so smooth and well done that it would literally bump your score up about two stars if there was actually any gameplay. Next time you come to the game portal, actually bring us something to play.