MiloBased,
You need to do more than write out a few words bud. Try adding some simple animation to the project. The lack of an actual font is what was killing the movie in all honesty. Its good to emphasize hand written text, but writing everything in chicken scratch style and not using proper grammar at the beginning forced this from 1 star to 0 stars.
Keep at it, but throw at least an hour into a project, not just random timing words with a HQ song overlay.
-Cran