Despite the choppiness...
Its one of those better madness cartoons fanmade. Still rubbish compared to Krinkels. But, cool. FUCKER!! GIMME MY DAMN PIE BITCH!!! Its good.
How to improve:
Try going back through with a higher frames per second. It would look a bit better. All the chatty bits could go a bit faster too.
Okay, I think Im done here.