interesting

i enjoyed your video. i found the scene where Dr. Robotnic turned into a hedgehog interesting. keep up the great work!

this is awsome

this is AWSOME dude goodwork

Meh

This has potential...but you lost my interest when you had turned Eggman into a hedgehog.

Good lord, that's alot of exposistion.

You have a looooot going on with this plot, but if you're not careful, it can get really out of hand, really fast. Just this episode, you introduced 4 new characters, 3 of whom were mysteriously eye-glowy evil, and 2 of whom were Shadow clones, and then turned Robotnik into ANOTHER Shadow clone, after making a shadow clone. This brings you to a total of 5 Shadows. (And one Dark Sonic.) Just saying.

That being said, you HAVE to HAVE TO learn the button/space to proceed trick. Seriously, it's not difficult! Check out the tutorial collection! It's all in there! You had so much dialogue in this thing it was ridiculous, I would have liked to read it at my own pace. Your writing isn't bad, but try to avoid cramming all the plot into one episode. Try to reveal one thing at a time; you have as many episodes as you want to do that. It keeps things interesting while people try to guess what you have planned. No story just comes right out and tells you everything at the start - then you have nothing to look forward to.

You didn't have any action, so I can't critique that, but Silver Sonic blowing up the Master Emerald didn't look good. And why does EVERYONE teleport away in the exact same manner? (You know, with vertical blur.) Speaking of which, the Master Emerald had a frame off, it kept jumping back a frame every loop. Things like that are worth paying attention to, it makes your flash look a lot better when you pay attention to detail.

(By the way, I should have episode one of my own flash up by the end of next month at least, so look forward to that. Here's a fun hint - Tails has a sword.)

That's awesome!!!

Make longer episodes!!!!