Not bad.
I see you took some of my advice, the action was considerably better this time around. Personally, I think it could have been faster, but then, I always think that. I think you tend to rely a bit too much on effects, and not enough on actual movement. (You know, have them run around a bit more, rather than just stand in place and wait to hit/get hit.)
The new text bars are pretty nice, I think you should keep them this way. Although I'll say it again, you HAVE to learn timeline control and basic buttons to give faster readers a way to get past all that talking without having to wait. It's really not that hard once you find a tutorial.