no remakes please
it's not bad , could be alot worse i guess , you kept fairly faithfull to the shots , but the idea in general displeases me , make up your own stuff , if ya wanna hommage FLCL do it properly not just pick out a scene and remake it with more or less poor voice actors . I'ts a great effort but its never getting close to the original and you didn't change enough to validate as too ; why would i wanna remake FLCL ? As an exercise its great for yourself but please , don't throw it out here and offend the fans , just stick to your usual stuff your doing a good job there . Also try to improve the voice acting a little , the audio seemed of rather poor quality , its a director's job to maintain overall quality .
ps ; inspiration , make a similar scene , not a remake , remakes suck in general ; its too hard to capture the essence then improve it in some way . Don't do this again in public please , unless your going to pour some serious effort into it .