Well....
Um....this is crap. But....your new so try diffrent things that might add to the flash...ok. But try to do more and take your time doing this, remember, First impression gives a lasting impression.
Ultimate Fate
June 9, 2008 –February 22, 2022
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
3 colors of sticks get into a quick brawl, and tear the place apart.
Took me around a day to make,
It's also my First flash. I plan on working on another flash animation about an evil bunny for a couple weeks.
~If you vote a 0/10 plz tell me why at least, it's all just a learning experience to me.
~hope u enjoy this, as much as i enjoyed making it
~xcen27
Edit: At Least it passed, not exactly flying colors but it did.
Reviews
<deleted> responds:
Kinda blunt there,
"First impression gives a lasting impression"- ouch? mabey it will shock people if my second flash does well, =D, sure hope so.
Well.
The Music was absolutely Horrible.
The Animation had no point or plot.
The Fact that you spent one day and it was your first flash should be a well enough sign to not even bother putting this up and not only wasting your time, but the time of any viewer who might feel like watching this God Awful wrenched Piece of work.
Amongst Other Awful things you should really think thrice before you start making another Flash.
Best of luck.
<deleted> responds:
woaw, its under a minute, not exactly a huge time waste there, you acually spent more time writing this review, and did u just tell me not to make another flash?
Cause i am anyways, and i wont just make it as fast as i did with this one.
edit
"The Music was absolutely Horrible"-I'm sorry that i was trying to not use the same music as everyone else on this site, im not just going to stick a linkin park song onto it and be done with it....
Well needs improvement
It could be a better movie if i was going faster and the box at the end is a kinda stupid... also the movie was very short and maybe you could have made it looked somewhat better.
<deleted> responds:
i originally had it going alot faster, decided to reduce the framerate because you could hardly tell what was happening.
okay..
not... that good... and kinda pointless. however, it's only ur first flash so i forgive u.
ways to improve:
construct a storyline
dont use the same scene for the whole movie
could have been longer
also, when it ended the sound just kept on going, i recommend u use some actionscript, theres quite a few tutorials on actionscript on newgrounds.
i hope ur next movie will be better
<deleted> responds:
I aim on spending alot more time on my next movie, with no more stick figures, full sound effects, L-M-H quality bar, pause+play button, and music that stops at the end of the movie, as well as a far better background, with 3+4 areas.
uhm...yea..
i hope my next movie will be better to.
Smells of n00b.
It's ok. However, flash entries usually take a lot longer than just a day to finish. Kinda corny humour. Polish up on your animation, try to make it a bit smoother. Also, try to aim for a longer flash next time.
P.S. Remember to end the music when the flash ends or else it loops over into it again if you decide to watch it twice in a row.
<deleted> responds:
Yea, at the moment i didnt know about the control+enter test animation, so i didnt know that my flash music kept going on and on till I watched it some time later after i submitted it here.
Thnx for pointing that out though.
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- 0.52 / 5.00