Eh?

Um, perhaps some audio would make this flash a bit more standable. Granted, stop animation is hard as hell, but there were too many pauses and well, as I said, the lack of audio seemed to really bring this down. Great concept though!

Not all bad! Keep practicing!

Cool stopmotion, um... are you dyslexic?

I wantedto know because you misspell a lot of word in your titles. Like using "there" instead of "their" and also "soljure" instead of "soldier". You are pretty good at stop motion though I think your editing needs work. Like, when the timeline is paused at one image for 12 seconds. That is Ok when it i significant, but often you do it at unnessessary times. It seems like the video is lagging, but I can tell it isn't. Also, the pauses really screw up the pacing, which makes it more boring than I think it should actually be. If you save photos in PNG they don't appear as pixilated. If you just do that I think you will hav some really awesome stop motion. My potential greatness senses are tingling. 3 Hypothetical Pancakes out of 5 (4 if refined a bit more).

Yeah...

This is THEIR story. Not there story. You need to proof read what you put on there. If you don't even look at what you wrote it makes people think you don't care about the actual animation part either.

hmm i don't know.

You know..I usually love stop motion video, but this one was horrid. First, the intro has grammar errors (you'd think that with six author's someone would have noticed..)

Also, it's poorly done with an inconsistent frame rate, and appears to be unfinished (no sound, bad light exposure, bad pauses.)

overall:

You're doing it wrong.