NG fad hater
Don't you just love people who _try_ to mock popular NG series, just because they know they couldn't make decent flashes if their lives depended on it?
Recommendations:
1) Stop wasting your time making yourself look like a loser. I don't think you can get much worse than submitting a badly made parody of a fad, out of clear jealousy. It's got "Please look at me!" written all over it.
2) Double check your spelling before you submit your work.
3) Come up with something original, rather than taking someone elses work, and copy/pasting in some blurb about real estate.
4) Learn how to put the dialogue in so that it appears properly, rather than like one and a half words a line.
Maybe someday you'll get over the fad of hating fads, and actually make something decent. Or maybe you'll carry on pouring your time into making people hate you. That's up to you.