I Didn't Really Injoy This.

I Still Think This Should Make It Onto Newgrounds But You Should Work On It. The Sound Was Good But For Some Reason I Didn't Like The Story Line And The Way Things Happened.

Have you ever heard of Nanobreaker?

In nanobreaker nanorobots get into the human body and mutate em transforming them in killing machines, kind of like your plot, but anyways nanobreaker sucked so let me get to the point.

The animation in some parts was quite good, but most of it were simple tweens and effects, i mean, you used a limbless hand to do the movement of loading a gun, how hard could it have been to add an arm to it?.

The voices, Ohhhh the voices were good, but the one in the intro telling the story took so much time between lines, it seemed like it was talking to retards or something, that cut out the mood.

The backgrounds had something but yet again most of em were simple one color backgrounds.

The effects were almost nice but in times too exagerated or too lazy, when otacon (atleast i think you made him otacon) blows the "mutant " arm, it seemed too exageradted and it would have been nicer if it had poped off our screens fast, and as an example of a lazy animation take a look at the fire, it didnt look fitting not even for the movie itself.

Im quite a metal Gear fan myself and i can tell you the storyline isnt great nor really creative, i mean nanobots going into the human body, as i told you it has already been done, in nanobreaker (ironically a Konami game), and it sucked in it, i dont see it fitting anywhere else specially metal gear.

i know its your side story, but noone should consider Otacon a fighter, i mean you've seen mgs4 trailers right?, he is hidding on a building while guiding snake with a robot, how brave can that be?.

work on the effects and try to shape more the storyline.

3/5

-SaintShun

Nice Artwork

Good Artwork just some points I need to point out. The intro was very slow - at first I thought that was the only thing. And the story kinda confuses me but I guess I'll have to wait to see how it progresses.

Wow...

Great movie and animation. this is without a doubt gonna be in the top 50.