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The Ninja Penguin

March 18, 2006 –
June 25, 2019
This entry was deleted.

Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.

Author Comments

Hello there, this is my third proper flash creation, personally i think it's an improvement, but i know i still have a long way to go.

Firstly, sorry for the rushed parts, working on this was a bitch, and if i work on it anymore, i'll die.

In theory, this could develop into a series, muchly depending on what you guys think of it. I've got plenty of ideas that can be put into pratice, and basic storyline, but i'd rather leave this how it is and get some feedback before going all-out on another. All reviews will be replied too, aslong as they are not overly offensive. >=(

I'd started this before noticing the idea had already been thought up, so credit to MinimaN and his series based on Ninja Penguins. :) which kicks ass, check it out.

Finally Enjoy! (if you die of boredom during the movie, i will not take responsibility.)

Reviews

Umm geez..

My my you've actually made a cartoon that got me to write a review for once.

I like the idea i guess. I mean.. A ninja penguin! Lol, where do you come up with these kind of things?

Ofcourse i got a few points of improvement:
1. Too slow.. I think it's been pointed out in previous reviews, the action is too slow paced, and the entire "oh no it's comming right at me" cutscenes that last for like 10 seconds reminded me of pokemon. And NO that is NOT a good thing!

2. Add more twists. It was a very predictable storyline, very cliche no offense.

3. Yeah ummm i really do wonder.. How the hell is it the guy/penguin/ninja owns (what seems to be) a red lamborgini and an airplane, both probably valuing hundreds of thousands, if not millions, just to blow them up while landing on Antartica?
I mean COME ON!
Fix that.. Please.. It hurt my soul in a deep touchy place.

Other than that i must say, with some practice, new storyline ideas and another fresh submission (mixed with coffee ofcourse!) i'd say you'll turn out to be a fine flash-artist.
Keep it up!

<deleted> responds:

Can't say i'm a fan of coffee but thanks for you're review. I know what you mean about the action scenes, i'd pretty much given up on the flash by the time I got to that section, so saying they were rushed would be a bit of an understatment.

I like the penguin having all that stuff, thought it gave him a bigger back story perhaps, but oh well, can't be to everyones taste.

Anyway, good and thought provoking review, nice one.

pissing great

what the hell!? all u people saying it was lame and such, shut the HELL UP! seriously cut him some slack, its way better thn most of u could do for a mile.. atleast he spent time doing it not being jack asses and dissing other peoples things.. as for me, i thought it was great :D made me laugh i mean come on.. its a ninja penguin ahahaha well done man! well done

<deleted> responds:

why thankyou my good man, glad you enjoyed it.

not really entertainig

just didnt fidn it to entertaining. it was very slow paced (despite hard fast music) the action was not very nice at all and seriously who just stands there watching a shurikan coming at them or a plane and a car falling on them?

<deleted> responds:

People that are told to do so by the animator. >=)

But seriously, fair enough, i see what you're getting at and agree, cheers for your review.

okay

Its a okay

<deleted> responds:

:D

Good

i thought it was very good, but your only flaw was the animation. there were times when it was too out of place and the movement was out of line. the graphics were awsome! very detailed areas and the the settings had layers of focusing. Although, the plot was a bit week, the whole cartoon was long. very good for a flash artist.
I gave you a 4 as a rating.

<deleted> responds:

Aye, the character models weren't easy to animate at all, hence the rushed last 2 scenes :p. Thanks for your review

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