Ok
It's not too bad but the audio is what made me stop watching. So you need better audio that actually goes with what's going on instead of random audio that doesn't exactly go with the storyline.
Paper Mario: Part 1
October 16, 2005 –June 14, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
I started a series on Paper Mario.The storyline is not as the same im just doing little pieces.Im hoping I can do maybe 6 episodes or more.I worked really hard on this and this is my fourth time sending something to newgrounds so hopefully it gets in.I enjoyed making this and I hope you guys enjoy watching it.
Update- Dear everyone who seen my movie I am sorry for the annoying sound, I will try and get voice actors.If anyone can be a voice actors please send me a email to upchuck_forever@hotmail.
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Reviews
<deleted> responds:
Dear Jess42882
As everyone has pointed out the sound is annoying and I will fix it as soon as I can. The new version should hopefully be better and not annoying but pleasent.Thanks for reviewing.
More Mario flashes...
Not one of the best Super Mario flashes I have seen so far. It needs more detail.
<deleted> responds:
Dear MajorSnake
Sorry if you dont like Mario flashes, well that bad ones like myne but I am going to fix it up and I like to congratulate you on the first person to not mention sound.Thanks for reviewing.
Weird....
That was really random, the sounds didnt really fit all to well. I found the American soldier part funny though.
<deleted> responds:
Dear Kieks
Im glad you liked the American soldier part even though I'm Canadian. I really need to fix the sounds before I get hate mail.I hope you enjoyed it.
Not too bad, keep trying
Good joke.
<deleted> responds:
Dear IceDragon64
Thanks for your reviewing even though its short.It still shows support and I will work harder and throw in some more jokes.
look man
i hate mario, but thats not the point
good graphics, voises aint bad (still hivious dow)
long story line, and more crap
its a good flash, but i think its 2 childish 4 newgrounds
srry man, good luck with it :)
<deleted> responds:
Dear ve_nom
Thanks for your review.I appreciate it, hopefully in the future, my newer version will make you happy.Thanks for reviewing.
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- 3.71 / 5.00