Keep at it.
You displayed talent here, no mistaking that. But the sound could use some better recording, and I didn't quite follow the point - but that could just be me. The animation styles were good, even if I didn't like what you were drawing with them.
Also - add a play button - I had to start the movie manually, and that seemed a poor mistake.
But keep at it; your artistic potential shined through, despite my disliking the movie as a whole.