Some advice
Alright here is the problems I had with the series so far:
-The animation can of course use improvment and i'm glad to see that you are starting to improve on it by adding more detail.
-The sound is horrible at the moment so you need to improve on that. From what I know you can just place a piece of paper over the mic to help with the sound peaking.
-The sound again is all over the place. Bring down the levels on the music and bring up the levels on the voices so I don't have to constantly change the volumes on my speakers.
Other than that I really enjoy it all and hope to see you continue the series.