Wrong, so very wrong.

What in your right mind would make you think of this?
"Hmm...I want to create a gollum/porn star sex scenario and then post it on Newgrounds!"
It's only funny because it's so ridiculous.
Original though, I'll give you that.

graphics would be cool if put to better use *pukes

yeh that was weird geez but the 3d imaging was cool what did they use?

uhh wat?

yeah ok its gud graphics but wat does it hav to to do with lord of the rings?
oh an wats the music?

Interesting, but the story sucked

Ok. For starters, the graphics kicked ass! Some of the best 3D rendered pics I've seen in a long time. The story was funny to a point. Now for the bad news. The animation could have been WAY better. You've got potential as a great artist, but as an animist, you have a long way to go. For have a nude babe, you decided to go with a blowjob & after-cumshot covering. I'm sure you could have come up with something better than that. Or maybe you just weren't able to animate any better than a repeated animation of a blow job. I noticed that the voices were taken directly from the movie. This may have been why you decided to go with a blowjob. Just a tip; drop trying to copy over the voices from the movie & come up with something original. This would have been a lot better if he was screwing her rather than receiving head, even if you ended up have to use text rather then voices.

Right...

While you have potential for animation, submiting this badly rendered Poser crap isn't going to get you anywhere; and neither is having a character getting a blowjob as the main theme. Try to come up with a theme that isn't base and retarded, and then you might have something...