Man oh man....this was terrible... however commendable... I know you are just starting out but jeez... dont submit something like this...this is just for your own viewing... the mouths looked terrible... the locker thing almost wasn't noticable if they hadn't been slanting slightly...I stopped about 3/4 the way in.... just work on your flash skills and you'll be pumping out good movies soon....

unless this was your first flash...i recomend retirenment

Your getting there,improve until the next version,im looking forward to seeing it!

Art's decent, animation's okay, humour is on the right track, but it's missing something - if I knew what, I'd be a fnarking comedian.

Voicework needs work. Sounded like both kids were stoned out of there mind, and not in the funny way.

I will say that I can see potential. If you keep at it, work on your animation (start with making better moving backgrounds - but you've already stated that) improve your art, you'll be a bigger star around here. Good luck.

The artwrok was alright...I guess. The sound was decent, but the words didn't match how their mouths were moving at all. Overall, not very good.