Hahaha i like the way you use NG and your homesite for this movies backgrounds.
One big problem: Newgrounds is black. Puppet is black. You can't see black on black. Make the puppet white or so.

The black stick, is a bit hard to see on the background, but good

it is not that bad dude!it is really not that bad!i wil be the saving stick for.don't care if i get a blam point or a protection point for this!

Not too bad, however, you should make Mr. Save some other color then black, cant see him in the black backround, at all ~_~

Unless you were going for that so you could make him reappear on the other side fo the screen, making us just "figure" he ran over ><

Not too bad tho, keep it up.

it is a great animation and interesting concept the problem is that you cant see the black stick man because of the background other than that good.