At 11/4/07 08:18 AM, raspberry-pie wrote: just curiouse.. am i going to be co-authored.. and i still think imma make another one.. but i wonna get an idea and get the voice acting first so i can get it done quik..

I have a few ideas... I've actually already recorded them, if you want to animate them, you can.

Oh and Androu1, you can do multiple parts... I think...

if you no wat they are and u have recorded the scripts yes i will do them.. and androu1 this is my third opne.. u can do multiple parts as long as u make sure with the collab owner.. o and pm me the ideas and scripts u have and the voices and all.. and ill do as many as i can.. and feel like.. okie?

At 11/4/07 08:47 AM, raspberry-pie wrote: if you no wat they are and u have recorded the scripts yes i will do them.. and androu1 this is my third opne.. u can do multiple parts as long as u make sure with the collab owner.. o and pm me the ideas and scripts u have and the voices and all.. and ill do as many as i can.. and feel like.. okie?

Ok, I sent you them, sendspace wasn't working, so I didn't send you one of the sendspace files... It's working now...

At 11/4/07 08:37 AM, timewisard wrote: Magma - Blaz:

Stupid Ducks! (RapidShare)

Stupid Ducks! (SendSpace)

Here!

thanks

At 11/4/07 08:59 AM, Magma-Blaz wrote:

At 11/4/07 08:37 AM, timewisard wrote: Magma - Blaz:

Stupid Ducks! (RapidShare)

Stupid Ducks! (SendSpace)

Here!

thanks

You're welcome!

You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

That makes sense XD. And you still haven't answered my question...

At 11/4/07 09:07 AM, timewisard wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

That makes sense XD. And you still haven't answered my question...

What is that?

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

So,is the one at I did of passing quality?

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

Based on my last sample, is it possible ill be in?

At 11/4/07 09:15 AM, SweetSkater wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:07 AM, timewisard wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

That makes sense XD. And you still haven't answered my question...

What is that?

are you doing a part? and is it going well?

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

So,is the one at I did of passing quality?

At 11/4/07 09:35 AM, timewisard wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:15 AM, SweetSkater wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:07 AM, timewisard wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

That makes sense XD. And you still haven't answered my question...

What is that?

are you doing a part? and is it going well?

I'm gonna be doing a part, and i haven't started it yet :) (this is not gonna be a short collab).

At 11/4/07 09:35 AM, Androu1 wrote:

At 11/4/07 09:05 AM, SweetSkater wrote: You can make multiple parts, doesn't mean they will get in automatically. They still have to be decent.

So,is the one at I did of passing quality?

No, sorry. It was too sketchy, the voice acting was kind of rough and the graphics were basic. The lip synching didn't work too well either. Atleast you know what to improve on :).

random sentence:
IMMA FIRING MAH lawyer

ok ill get back to work now, enough fun =\

At 11/4/07 10:31 AM, SweetSkater wrote: It was too sketchy.

Would it be nicer if I use the line tool? I think it would atleast look less sketchy.

the voice acting was kind of rough

I need you to redo the voices,timewisard.Please :O

and the graphics were basic.

I want them to be basic >:(

The lip synching didn't work too well either.

I suck at lip synching.That's a fact.Science told me so.

At 11/4/07 07:22 AM, Androu1 wrote: Look at what I did :P

What's with the shitty mic?

At 11/4/07 04:43 AM, SweetSkater wrote:

Bomberdude. Maybe make the lines on the people neater? And the man's head shape more realistic, and his face colour not as yellow, and his hair not sit on the top of his head. Other than that i pretty much like it. But it needs some improving.

i`agree the the guys face. and ill try to improve the color. but im confused on the lines, its brush drawing after all. if you know how to make them smoother, i will. well thanks for feedback.

Our we supposed to put our parts into movie clips?

:Sorry for the double post.

At last. First part is done (link)

If you guy's like it i will make another.

Also, I emailed the .fla to you Sweet Skater.

At 11/4/07 01:20 PM, SACP wrote:

Sorry for the double post.

At last. First part is done (link)

If you guy's like it i will make another.

Also, I emailed the .fla to you Sweet Skater.

Erm. It's pretty bad, it didn't make me laugh either. Sorry :(

At 11/4/07 01:40 PM, SweetSkater wrote: Erm. It's pretty bad, it didn't make me laugh either. Sorry :(

God damn it. Well i told you my idea and you said it was funny. So idk wtf u want me to do.

Here... I fixed the timing and the lazer. Tell me if it's any better. (link)

what do you think of my one so far. its nearly finished.

http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image =lazercollabducksdw1.swf

At 11/4/07 02:50 PM, Magma-Blaz wrote: what do you think of my one so far. its nearly finished.

http://img139.imageshack.us/my.php?image =lazercollabducksdw1.swf

Not too bad, make the persons voice louder and improve the lip synching :)

Eh. Sweet skater. You wanna tell me what you think bout the improved version or what?

i hate being ignored on advice...

HELP

At 11/4/07 03:00 PM, SACP wrote: Eh. Sweet skater. You wanna tell me what you think bout the improved version or what?

Ok, Crit D:.
To start with, there isn't even a background. Theres a name that appears at the top which attracts attention away and looks lame. The girls face looks really bad (no offense) and the mans hand doesn't even have an arm attatched. The bell end is a weird shape and the penis looks kind of deformed, the testicles are somehow attatched to the back of the shaft working against gravity. And there is no storyline.
The voice acting is good, but pointless if you know what i mean. I suggest actually finding a porn clip and ripping the sound off it.

i`agree the the guys face. and ill try to improve the color. but im confused on the lines, its brush drawing after all. if you know how to make them smoother, i will. well thanks for feedback.

The lines on him are like, overlapping and like you have literally drawn it with a pencil. I dont care what tool you use just make it smooth. Smooth = same thickness all the way through and not overlapping.

At 11/4/07 03:09 PM, SweetSkater wrote: Ok, Crit D:.
To start with, there isn't even a background. Theres a name that appears at the top which attracts attention away and looks lame. The girls face looks really bad (no offense) and the mans hand doesn't even have an arm attatched. The bell end is a weird shape and the penis looks kind of deformed, the testicles are somehow attatched to the back of the shaft working against gravity. And there is no storyline.
The voice acting is good, but pointless if you know what i mean. I suggest actually finding a porn clip and ripping the sound off it.

Omg. u are such a dumbass. There is no background because there is no background in the orginal lazer collection. The name is supposed to be there cause its mine. I understand the part bout the girl's face. There isn't supposed to be an arm and the balls are below the shaft if you paid attention. No storyline? Are you fucking kidding me. Seriously, judge urself before you judge others. I thought you actually had some valid reasons for saying no but boy was I wrong.

Some people's kids....

At 11/4/07 03:11 PM, SweetSkater wrote:

The lines on him are like, overlapping and like you have literally drawn it with a pencil. I dont care what tool you use just make it smooth. Smooth = same thickness all the way through and not overlapping.

well i guess if thats ur preference of art. ill do it. i already have an idea of how to do it.

Modify< Shape< Smooth
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