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my first every flash

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my first every flash 2006-12-16 21:44:32


be harsh i dont care. This is my first time trying to make an image for flash

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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-16 21:46:14


well thats stupid thanks


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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-16 21:48:23


this was my 2nd try so again be harsh tell me what i need 2 fix

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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-16 21:48:36


I.. uhh... Ok, you need to put more effort into it. I recomend making a layer on top of it and using a low alpha black to shade it better. But the more realistic thing would be to throw it out. It's quite poor. Try doing a trace of somthing off of google to get a feel for it then try again?


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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-16 21:50:17


that was more stupider


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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-17 08:43:32


it looks like it was drawn in paint or photoshop


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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-17 09:59:30


At 12/17/06 08:43 AM, CrispyZero wrote: it looks like it was drawn in paint or photoshop

No, thats clearly flash, dont you see the common flash gradients all around, photoshop has better gradients, this is flash.

Also you can notice the softing in the pencil lines

Response to my first every flash 2006-12-17 10:01:23


first one is ugly and the second on is just silly.


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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-17 23:29:02


ok they sucked and i ment to say... no this is not flash this is just the images i may or may not be using but anyways... i tryed to make a beter harder guy to make that could be used in my first flash thing be harsh on what i need improving but instead of saying... "thats shit" actualy say what i need to do to make it beter.

if this suck its back to trying to mod cars in photoshop for me

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Response to my first every flash 2006-12-18 02:47:34


1st...just stupid-looking, make the head not a perfect circle and also curve the nose a bit
2nd...not too bad for a cartoon character, just shrink the nose a little
3rd...nice, but head looks a little too small

Overall, I suggest you use simpler characters like the ones in Madness. Just invent your own. It doesn't matter if they're 16 feet tall.

And draw in Flash.

CKY

Response to my first every flash 2006-12-18 03:11:59


STOP USING FILTERS

my RAM shudders at the thought

Response to my first every flash 2006-12-18 04:53:28


thanx for the info im changing the image now

Response to my first every flash 2006-12-18 05:22:32


ok i made some small changes to the image

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