Well, I gave it a try. Few impressions so far (I've not made it to the end yet)
That's my impression at first pages. Don't know if I'll read more, the drug dealing part in combination with 2nd person perspective repulsed me a lot, to be honest.
late response, but the reason for the pacing was for an English assignment, and the last stretch was rather rushed in my opinion
As for the 2nd Perspective, I did that as if we were the observer of the situation
The drug dealing thing was added as a way to at least give a reason why they are in limbo
Ty for reading, taking your time finishing up the entire story and give your final thoughts please
I think this is a pretty good story, but like with the other guy, I don't like the story told in the second person. I really love the fact that the Angel took the form of a bear though. I would like to read more, like would there be a sequel?