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Need criticism.

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Need criticism. 2024-02-14 14:31:16


I'd just like to have some criticism just so I get to know how I can improve.


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Response to Need criticism. 2024-02-15 08:17:00


What song would you like feedback on?


Charl

Response to Need criticism. 2024-02-15 13:22:54


At 2/15/24 08:17 AM, Charlmot wrote: What song would you like feedback on?


oh pretty much any. I don't really mind


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Response to Need criticism. 2024-02-15 20:28:15 (edited 2024-02-15 20:31:33)


At 2/15/24 01:22 PM, Lumiflag wrote:
At 2/15/24 08:17 AM, Charlmot wrote: What song would you like feedback on?
oh pretty much any. I don't really mind


Alrighty i took a listen and I think I got some things for ya!


First of all, your melodies are great

And your ideas are even greater


Some things that stuck out to me personally are:


- the sound choice and sound design

- the mixing and just generally how loud some things are in reference to the rest of the track


These are things that get better over time and as you develop your own taste (which you could very well have already done and thats fine), but if youd like im sure you can find tips and tricks videos on youtube to help speed up the process a bit


(This is not to say ive mastered those myself of course im still very much trying to improve in these as well)


Others may feel different but music is subjective after all, keep being you if you so wish, its up to you what you do with this feedback


Charl