I’ve been working on a script for the pilot episode of my OC lore. The thing is that this is my first ever screenplay and this wasn’t the first draft and I’m trying to get it in the best shape possible. As long as it’s constructive, any criticism is appreciated.
Synopsis: When a young woman is taken to a secret government facility with strange beings, she must adapt to the insanity.
At 2/11/24 12:11 AM, SpicyShark wrote: I’ve been working on a script for the pilot episode of my OC lore. The thing is that this is my first ever screenplay and this wasn’t the first draft and I’m trying to get it in the best shape possible. As long as it’s constructive, any criticism is appreciated.
Synopsis: When a young woman is taken to a secret government facility with strange beings, she must adapt to the insanity.
Script Here
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