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Story Feedback 2024-01-19 16:16:23


Looking for some feedback on my story as I'm struggling with the ending and I think some criticism would help me with shaping a satisfying ending.


The basic premise is a horror story about a group of teenagers and a Torrent of a lost horror movie.

Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4