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please give me some criticism

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i would like some pros and cons of my art.

Response to please give me some criticism 2023-12-08 12:51:24


Well idk, it's simple, but simple doesn't equal bad, it really all depends on what you're aiming for.


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Response to please give me some criticism 2023-12-08 13:33:06


It's great but I'm not fond of the backdrop to be fully honest. I'd say: make those floaters monochrome or go with a pitch black background.


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Response to please give me some criticism 2023-12-08 15:22:02


Cute character design, love their outlining.

I agree with @CzyShy. The background doesn't really fit. It might look weird with a load of blank space around it so I'd say make the stars and whatnot monochrome like the character.

Response to please give me some criticism 2023-12-08 16:07:45


It looks nice and seems very clean, but doesn't give me a hint for what that is at all. A bit of action or emotion reaction in the image would help to know better what it is about (other than just a half body pic)


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Composition is simple but fun, not really something to crit on a technical level. I think the grouping of 3 shapes in the bottom left is interesting, but I think grouping like that needs to happen again, maybe to a lesser degree, somewhere else like the top right to balance it and make it look more intentional.

Response to please give me some criticism 2023-12-09 14:21:07


As people have said the background is kind of jumbled and distracting. A less chaotic pattern might help.