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Criticize my song 2

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Criticize my song 2 2023-11-11 04:33:23


Can you criticize my song as an ost?

Response to Criticize my song 2 2023-11-11 15:08:16


At 11/11/23 04:33 AM, Mesage wrote: Can you criticize my song as an ost?
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1262403


make it more clean, change instruments or idk.

Response to Criticize my song 2 2023-11-12 10:22:32


Just go to musician school

Response to Criticize my song 2 2023-11-13 18:38:33


At 11/11/23 04:33 AM, Mesage wrote: Can you criticize my song as an ost?
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1262403

Wow sounds amazing

Response to Criticize my song 2 2023-11-14 09:25:29


At 11/11/23 04:33 AM, Mesage wrote: Can you criticize my song as an ost?
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1262403


Bro. The song is good but your drums are buried in the mix. Listen to any dubstep song and you'll hear the drums pop. Learn how to do that first.


Response to Criticize my song 2 2023-11-16 16:08:23


At 11/11/23 04:33 AM, Mesage wrote: Can you criticize my song as an ost?
https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1262403


Some things to learn :]


EQing needs to be better. Try to use it to separate frequency ranges to accentuate clarity in both per instrument.


Needs more variation in the horns, + better sound selection. After a bit it just ends up sounding the same over and over.


Read up on gain staging. Mixing feels pretty flat too so could go for better compression.


Also, make sure you're not clipping the master bus or using a limiter unless you know what you're doing.


There's lots of stray frequencies all over the place so I would say learn proper EQ first. Good luck on your musical journey.


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