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Shower thought Doujin idea

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(I was taking a shower when i thought about it)

(just wanted to see any opinions on how i could flesh it out)

["Love Making And Nice Impulsive Advanced Novelty In Action" or L.O.V.E.M.A.N.I.A for short]

 

-Summary-

A cop lady on patrol suddenly meets a strange man in white linen and wearing a mask with a heart symbol on it… it turns out that he is part of a cult solely focused on the idea of sex. The cultist is the cult accountant, and he feels very lonely and left out because he can’t attend the orgies since he is the accountant… so he asks the cop lady if she could be his partner for today, just so he can find out what it’s like.

The cop girl agrees and he gives him a champaign bottle. “Cult courtesy for nonmembers”. The champagne is locally brewed by their members, so it’s laced with an aphrodisiac. He pours a glass and warns her to take it slowly. He starts conversation about her day, and he then talks about himself and how lonely and envious he is with the others… the cop girl comforts him and reassures that he’ll have the best time of his life. They step inside the dungeon (Called Ring of Lust), which is empty since they are the earliest to attend. He tells her that it’s not as lively without the other members, but she’s fine with that. They step inside one of the rooms of the dungeon. The girl sits by the bed and starts teasing him to get him excited. He then takes off his mask, revealing a youthful face. He says it's his first time and that he’ll do his best to please a woman like her. The cop takes this compliment and starts undressing her uniform, revealing the body of a more “experienced” lady. She tells him that he shouldn’t worry because she’ll be teaching him everything he needs to know, and that they’ll both enjoy it thoroughly. This gets him all flustered and excited. He nervously approaches her, but the cop tells him to take off his cloak. He reluctantly complies and it’s revealed that he has a twink build. He’s insecure about it since he believes he’s not as “Presentable” as the other male members, But the he cop thinks that it’s adorable and cute, and that he shouldn’t feel bad about it. Then they do the do. After that, they snuggle for a bit and “Hold hands”. then they start hearing members attending the dungeon, with one of the members wondering why the accountant wasn’t there to greet them. But anyway, the members start fixing up the place for the others and they start “Partying” and commencing the orgy. The cop is surprised by the sight and says that it’s time for her to leave because she doesn’t wanna get caught up in this. The accountant tries to ask her to stay but stops himself, instead asking her if they’ll see each other again. The doujin ends with the cop asking where she could sign up.


TURKEYMAN

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That’s a fun, endearingly cheesy premise and I love it. Wouldn’t necessarily read it myself, erotic comics as a whole aren’t my cup of tea, but go forth and spread your cheesy porn to all the cheesy porn enjoyers out there!


Someone please help me revive my clubs

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Response to Shower thought Doujin idea 2023-09-16 23:31:54


At 9/16/23 07:49 PM, Thetageist wrote: That’s a fun, endearingly cheesy premise and I love it. Wouldn’t necessarily read it myself, erotic comics as a whole aren’t my cup of tea, but go forth and spread your cheesy porn to all the cheesy porn enjoyers out there!


i do love cheese... and porn...


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Response to Shower thought Doujin idea 2023-09-17 15:04:21


At 9/16/23 11:31 PM, Turkeyman66 wrote:
At 9/16/23 07:49 PM, Thetageist wrote: That’s a fun, endearingly cheesy premise and I love it. Wouldn’t necessarily read it myself, erotic comics as a whole aren’t my cup of tea, but go forth and spread your cheesy porn to all the cheesy porn enjoyers out there!
i do love cheese... and porn...


I'd rather be a man nun.


Love Attacts Like a an Invivisible God in the Snow. The Devil always looses so presevire until the morning star arises in your own heart.

Response to Shower thought Doujin idea 2023-09-17 17:54:27


The acronym would actually be L.M.N.I.N.A. haha


Those are my 2 cents, anyway!

Response to Shower thought Doujin idea 2023-09-17 20:17:14


At 9/17/23 05:54 PM, ArGxITA wrote: The acronym would actually be L.M.N.I.N.A. haha

Who’s nina?


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Response to Shower thought Doujin idea 2023-09-18 20:04:15


At 9/17/23 03:04 PM, DTstrick9AtakCAT wrote:
At 9/16/23 11:31 PM, Turkeyman66 wrote:
At 9/16/23 07:49 PM, Thetageist wrote: That’s a fun, endearingly cheesy premise and I love it. Wouldn’t necessarily read it myself, erotic comics as a whole aren’t my cup of tea, but go forth and spread your cheesy porn to all the cheesy porn enjoyers out there!
i do love cheese... and porn...
I'd rather be a man nun.


…That’s a… That’s a monk…


Someone please help me revive my clubs

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