Just finished an episode of a script I've been working on. The story is about a man named Hector and a lamia girl named Fel. They're a team of adventurers who go by the name Cider Pissers. Every episode has them bumbling through a new quest in a fantasy world hellbent on bumming Hector out.
I'd love some feedback on both the content and the formatting if anyone would like to help. It's about 22 pages, so not super long. The Google Doc link is right here:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA7FeE3KAfGpu_iMjOT0-g0nTiKXz_T2OEFBoFUAJgE/edit?usp=sharing