Rockie’s Poetry/Lyrics Hub (Cringy)

[KhaosKitsune617]

Hi. This is my poetry thread. The poems are pretty crappy, but hey, I just started making poems, so dont expect super beautiful poems.

The poems here are usually pretty dark and depressing. But thats how the world is, so leave if you cant handle depressing shit.

I dont have a set poetry schedule, so expect me to post often sometimes and leave it untouched on other times.

One of my first poems:

Yearning for Simplicity

Society chokes my heart.

Time breaks my soul.

Violence is a dangerous dart.

But simplicity will fill my hole.

Why dont you come to me?

[SnakeBearer]

Darker stories and folktales used to be the norm, as well as poetry. DIsney movies are often based off them, and given happier tones.

Poems like the Raven by poe, or works like Dante's inferno have survived longer than most sappy, happy stories. You probably know the bloody Mary myth as well, it was based off Mary Tudor. Whom they called bloody Mary after her reign ended.

Anyhow I like the name kitsune, it means nine tailed fox in Japanese, but in Korea they call the nine tailed fox kumiho.

If you are interested here's a link to an old fairytale called the fox sister. The nine tailed foxes are not always depicted as demons in myths FYI.

[KhaosKitsune617]

Cringy

All my stuff is crap

Totally cringe

They belong in heaps of scrap

Too far to cross with a bridge

[KhaosKitsune617]

At 12/29/22 10:45 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: Hi. This is my poetry thread. The poems are pretty crappy, but hey, I just started making poems, so dont expect super beautiful poems.

The poems here are usually pretty dark and depressing. But thats how the world is, so leave if you cant handle depressing shit.

I dont have a set poetry schedule, so expect me to post often sometimes and leave it untouched on other times.

One of my first poems:

Yearning for Simplicity

Society chokes my heart.
Time breaks my soul.
Violence is a dangerous dart.
But simplicity will fill my hole.
Why dont you come to me?

Mr. Leader

A cruel enemy.

Dystopian as hell.

Universally loved,

Murdering your kids and your wife

But seen as like God.

Beloved, yet

Idiotic and abusive.

Too insane for his own good.

Crazy for money and power.

He is coming for us.

[Vista-Sound13]

At 12/29/22 10:45 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: Hi. This is my poetry thread. The poems are pretty crappy, but hey, I just started making poems, so dont expect super beautiful poems.

The poems here are usually pretty dark and depressing. But thats how the world is, so leave if you cant handle depressing shit.

I dont have a set poetry schedule, so expect me to post often sometimes and leave it untouched on other times.

One of my first poems:

Yearning for Simplicity

Society chokes my heart.
Time breaks my soul.
Violence is a dangerous dart.
But simplicity will fill my hole.
Why dont you come to me?

Very relatable, let's be honest.

I like this poem for that reason. It's like "Life is hard because it's complex, and we want it to be simpler."

[KhaosKitsune617]

What have I done to God

To have my life turn to shit?

I wanna feel like two peas in a pod

But my world fucks up with it

They say “You are not alone,

Just stop complaining and get on.

But I have risked blood and bone

To feel free, is freedom a con?

[KhaosKitsune617]

At 12/29/22 10:45 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: Hi. This is my poetry thread. The poems are pretty crappy, but hey, I just started making poems, so dont expect super beautiful poems.

The poems here are usually pretty dark and depressing. But thats how the world is, so leave if you cant handle depressing shit.

I dont have a set poetry schedule, so expect me to post often sometimes and leave it untouched on other times.

One of my first poems:

Yearning for Simplicity

Society chokes my heart.
Time breaks my soul.
Violence is a dangerous dart.
But simplicity will fill my hole.
Why dont you come to me?

“Your Funeral”

As I walk along a wretched path

Of darkness, doom and despair

I remember you reminding me

That I could still be free

You stopped me from doing

Very terrible things

You reignite my spark

Inside my rotten,fading heart.

Now I see your coffin

Covered in flowers and vines

I just want to say

Please dont forget me

[KhaosKitsune617]

At 12/29/22 10:45 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: Hi. This is my poetry thread. The poems are pretty crappy, but hey, I just started making poems, so dont expect super beautiful poems.

The poems here are usually pretty dark and depressing. But thats how the world is, so leave if you cant handle depressing shit.

I dont have a set poetry schedule, so expect me to post often sometimes and leave it untouched on other times.

One of my first poems:

Yearning for Simplicity

Society chokes my heart.
Time breaks my soul.
Violence is a dangerous dart.
But simplicity will fill my hole.
Why dont you come to me?

(This is a joke poem)

Jack had the time of his life

He had sex with his boss’s wife

There’s shirts on the floor

And blood on the door

And the boss grabbed a knife

[TreeWorld]

At 2/12/23 11:08 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: What have I done to God
To have my life turn to shit?
I wanna feel like two peas in a pod
But my world fucks up with it

They say “You are not alone,
Just stop complaining and get on.
But I have risked blood and bone
To feel free, is freedom a con?

this one and the joke one is pretty good. i like the last line is like an interruption of the previous subject

"...To feel free—is freedom a con?"

by using an em dash.

[KhaosKitsune617]

At 2/14/23 12:45 AM, TreeWorld wrote:

At 2/12/23 11:08 PM, KhaosKitsune617 wrote: What have I done to God
To have my life turn to shit?
I wanna feel like two peas in a pod
But my world fucks up with it

They say “You are not alone,
Just stop complaining and get on.
But I have risked blood and bone
To feel free, is freedom a con?

this one and the joke one is pretty good. i like the last line is like an interruption of the previous subject
"...To feel free—is freedom a con?"

by using an em dash.

Yeah. I wanted to add more drama to my poems. The majority of my poems are meant to be dark,depressing, impactful and sometimes morbid.

[KhaosKitsune617]

Noob

I may just be a noob

But I am not a rube

I try to put soul and heart

In all my works of art.

But I barely have much time

And my motivation is like a squeeze lime

Dried,withered and sad

But my art isnt so bad

[KhaosKitsune617]

Heads up, this is one of the most darkest poems I made.

Everything is Doomed

Even if it may be noon

I see no light

All I feel is doom

My soul is in a constant fight.

I try my hardest to smile

In all this pain and trauma

But nothing sweet for miles

Except constant drama

All this war and destruction

And eternal pain

Even worse, so much corruption

And no fucking gain

Mother nature’s scarred-ass face

All this litter in one place

No more care, no more heart

Just nukes, bombs and darts

How can I still believe in peace?

When our goals are to kill and tease

All our silenced voices

And all the painful noises

I just wanna see joy

As a girl, non-bi or boy

And survive my days

And escape this haze.

[KhaosKitsune617]

15

(Stupid ass poem about me turning 15.)

Just got a year older

But life still gets much colder

As much as I love cake

I feel like being raked

I’m too old to play with toys

Yet too young to hang out with boys

I cant have a party

And I still have a broken heart-y.