First full length flash, thoughts?

[DaddyDiogenes]

I,m making my first full length animation and summarizing a book for english class. my grade wont be hurt if it's bad, but i'd like it to be the best ever.

any feedback is appreciated, keep in mind that I'm still working on some parts.

Thank you!

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[DaddyDiogenes]

ok, realized that probably wast a very good link
also, i've changed a lot of stuff

new link