So I had this idea a while back, and started writing it out like a book. I believe I was around 15 or 16 when I started this, perhaps younger! I may never actually finish this tale but I thought I'd share the first chapter.
A black void was all the creature could percept, his consciousness suddenly torn by surprise. What had happened? The creature was unable to understand this, yet his stability was recomforming, slowly bringing his will into focus. Menrick. Menrick was his name, things were starting to come back to him now. Fight, he must fight. For himself? No, no not himself there has to be more!
Wind sliced at Menrick’s skin as he plummeted towards the surface of a very rocky looking planet. How long had be been out? Eh, who cares thought Menrick as he spun himself around in the air so that he could face what was below him. He remembered now, a transport vehicle of some kind had carried him and several other soldiers, and must’ve been shot down. Blast! If only he had heard the projectile coming, he could have shielded himself and perhaps the other soldiers lucky enough to be with him. Menrick laughed at the irony. He was not human by far, in fact he was something called a Shinkraw throughout the cosmos. He was tall and slender with black skin and turquoise eyes, his legs and arms were horrendously long for his body, but an ample strength emanated from them. The Shinkraw are a generous and hopeful race, and with unlimited power at their fingertips they stand to preserve the galaxy for the better of all living things. If only such a task was as simple as it sounded. Since the dawn of what we call time, there has been a group of entitites who exist only to wreak havoc and destroy. They are the Handrehah. War had reached the far ends of the cosmos as the Shinkraw and Handrehah clashed in a bout of superiority. Eventually the stakes got higher and the measures each side would take to defeat the other grew more reckless and dangerous. Menrick was at this planet for one purpose, to punish the Handrehah who occupied its platteu riddled surface. He would’ve jumped out of his transport anyway, but hey a little surprise wasn’t always too awful. After all he was alive and kicking thanks to the powerful enhancements his body had procured. Menrick was way stronger than any normal soldier or military force and had gained the title of Oen’ki only handed down to the one thousand most intensely enhanced super soldiers of the Shinkraw. Each were different and had their own abilities, but all were utterly lethal and invincible. Menrick looked down at the battle taking place below, huge explosions flared everywhere, but he was still high above them. He guessed this was some kind of intermediary zone between arial bombardment and ground assault. A deafening crack echoed massive sound waves as an explosion glanced Menrick, seering his side. He wasn’t thinking right yet, hopefully no more big bad explosions would come and tear him to pieces before he could even set foot on the cursed planet. Menrick concentrated and soon he was no longer free falling, but accelerating towards the surface, explosions raked the sky he flew through, but none of them touched him due to an invisible bubble that protected him. Such tricks were common with Oen’ki, using gravity technology they can fly and protect themselves with ease. The objective was still fuzzy to Menrick, memory loss had encroached on his brain after such severe trauma to his armor and person. Menrick’s few braids of hair sat idle at his neck, all air resistance and wind blocked out by his gravity shield. Still unsure of his purpose, he scanned the battlefield further, but there was so much to look at. Menrick’s eyes could see to uncalculated distances and he could see the faces of dead warriors with horrifying clarity. Finally he found something that struck as important, a place with three Oen’ki warriors. He could see their target, an ancient Handrehah leading the evil on this planet. The evil general was like a whisp, and was slightly transparent. His body looked like it was made of a bunch of purple crystals that dissolved and reshaped in a never ending fluid motion. It was massive compared to a human and had certain spots on its body that were immensely dark as if they swallowed the light that was around them. Menrick recognized one of his friends, an Oen’ki move towards the Handrehah. It charged with a speed that was invisble, and attempted to strike at the ethereal creature with a scythe like weapon of renown and glory. The Handrehah simply vanished into nothingness and appeared above the Oen’ki, expunging a giant sphere of raw energy that perfectly touched the floor the Shinkraw had been standing. A large gust of hot wind flowed into the empty air pocket the attack made, and nothing could be seen of the Shinkraw. The Handrehah floated in its position, motionless. Then Menricks friend emerged from above the Handrehah, carving a magnificent arc of power through the air, making a large scar in the earth below several meters deep. The Handrehah had been sliced in two, its ends slowly drifting apart. Menrick smiled, knowing his confidence was not foolish this time. Suddenly the two half’s of the mesmerizing purple creature lunged at the Oen’ki, who was utterly deceived into thinking it was victorious. The transparent apparition quickly disolved into the Shinkraw, and his arms and legs began to slowly spread open. Menrick gazed in horror as his friend met his doom at the will of the Handrehah. The Oen’ki below hovered with his limbs shaking violently, his head renched back in agony. The victims hands sprang open and the fingers started to bend backwards. A bright light shone from what appeared to be the center of the creatures physique. Purple and red fire seeped from its eyes, mouth and skin, the vicious shaking of its limbs intensified. Then all the movement and flame seemed to be sucked into one still moment of nothingness, right before the valiant alien exploded in a massive spray of blood and energy. Menrick’s temper rose dramatically and he could think of nothing more than killing his enemy. Vengence would be his, and that Handrehah would not be the first, nor the last he would kill here today. No, all would pay, this whole damn planet would pay. Seeps of purple material all seemed to briefly shimmer and they came together into the mass that was the Handrehah creature, it’s domain now empty. The other Oen’ki were leading troops, and it was now up to Menrick to destroy the enemy leader. He flew as fast as he could to the place his friend had died, but the Handrehah was already aware of his imcoming presence, and disappeared. He landed, hoping he could sense it, but he couldn’t. About fifteen meters from his feet lay a vast amount of his comrades blood, and Menrick felt a deep sense of dread. That feeling seemed to trigger something, because the Handrehah attacked him viciously, shooting volleys of dark purple energy at Menrick. The balls of energy where very lethal, seeming to be like miniature black holes, their centers dark and unending like an optical illusion. Menrick was in five different places within a second, jumping, flying, falling, doing whatever it took to avoid any damage by the aliens attacks. The entity disapeard again, and Menrick felt anger spring into his heart at its cowardice. Suddenly the floor rumbled, small rocks hopped up and down as fresh vibrations pulsated through the solid rock. The chaotic moving of the area became unsettling, and Menrick could no longer maintain acceptable balance so he levitated a bit. He could see what was coming at him, it was a burrowing creature of some kind, and it was angry. He moved out of the way as it broke through the planets crust and thrust its body into the air. It was a disgusting looking creature, with huge spines that exceded the skin on both its back and front. These spines were surrounded by fierce musculature of unknown purpose, and they slightly ungelated as the creature bent itself to dive back into its home evniroment. It was huge, and a