Knocked this together in an hour or two as a quick practice and was hoping to get some feedback. Please forgive the lack of audio, colour or discernible plot/point.
damn. my girlfriend left herself signed in on my laptop :s. that was me
At 4/29/12 12:25 AM, JoHobo2 wrote: Knocked this together in an hour or two as a quick practice and was hoping to get some feedback. Please forgive the lack of audio, colour or discernible plot/point.
rocket practice
Nice. I'm afraid I don't have any real feedback for you. Clean it up, add colour, sound and backgrounds and maybe you'd get some comments. But at this stage? It's not bad.
Sorry.
Looking good! I think the smoke at the end should dissipate a little more slowly and the blood splat on the screen should be a little more animated (some guts slowly dripping down would be nice).
