i am still trying to get the hang of posting in a forum
[-___-] this is my first post and i wanted to share my artwork...
i really need some serious critiques on my artwork. This is a Fan Art that I drew of Poison and it was done on Adobe illustrator...Please let me know what you think and if i need any improvement :)
thank you so much
-sukie
I actually really like the picture and the whole style you are going for. I'd like to see more.
Her arms are short compared to her forearms, especially her right arm.
Hi there! Welcome to the Art Forum!
As for your pic, her nose is very upturned, her fingers are kinda small, the cigarette is really big and her right (our left) eye is too high.
Hope to see more of you posting!
You really shouldn't just copy and paste the arms, it's kinda lazy.
Hello, and welcome to Newgrounds!
You have a nice sense of aestethics, and I like your style. You might want to create a better balance between your lines, a few of them are too wide in comparison. Additionally, the two arms are somewhat out of proportion.
yea i know i shouldn't -___- i had a time limited and it was something quick...but next time i will take my time
:)
thank you so much :) i'm glad u like it [i do think it still need a lot of improvement -__-]
At 2/6/11 01:53 AM, M-Vero wrote: You really shouldn't just copy and paste the arms, it's kinda lazy.
yea i know i shouldn't -___- i had a time limited and it was something quick...but next time i will take my time
:)
If Stephen Fry says it, then it must be true!
At 2/6/11 01:24 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: Color wouldn't hurt.
i am really bad wit colouring -___-
At 2/6/11 09:39 PM, SukieLuv wrote:At 2/6/11 01:24 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: Color wouldn't hurt.i am really bad wit colouring -___-
Good. Practice. And practice. And Practice.
And then you will get better :P
It doesn't help if you don't try...
At 2/6/11 09:43 PM, Kakashi1930 wrote:At 2/6/11 09:39 PM, SukieLuv wrote:Good. Practice. And practice. And Practice.At 2/6/11 01:24 PM, JackDGreatest wrote: Color wouldn't hurt.i am really bad wit colouring -___-
And then you will get better :P
It doesn't help if you don't try...
i agreed :) i am practicing and omg i love your work :)
thank you for check out mine :)
i'm still working on it [ i know the colour is off
Good enough for me. So you're using illustrator? I heard it's very difficult to use especially with coloring. Good luck with that.
At 2/6/11 09:51 PM, SukieLuv wrote:
i agreed :) i am practicing and omg i love your work :)
thank you for check out mine :)
Oh shit.
Kakashi1930, Fanbase of: 1
I feel so special :3
At 2/6/11 10:00 PM, Fifty-50 wrote: Good enough for me. So you're using illustrator? I heard it's very difficult to use especially with coloring. Good luck with that.
actually it's not so bad...just have to deal wit a lot of layers :)
i also did an experiment on photoshop with this one...^___^
At 2/6/11 01:18 AM, DisturbedMDD wrote: I actually really like the picture and the whole style you are going for. I'd like to see more.
thank you so much for liking it ;)
and i will definitely try to post up some more
