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Keep me alive

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Keep me alive 2011-02-05 10:02:05


just trying to keep myself alive on this forum, i'm not very on much, well here's my crappy stuff.

Keep me alive

Response to Keep me alive 2011-02-05 10:48:05


It is not crappy at all.

1. You have an interesting composition with the ground shot.
2. It does not look like you just threw it together on the fly.
3. It is not a character that I know, so you are not just copying what everyone else is doing.

Stellar job man, hope the others are as good.

Response to Keep me alive 2011-02-05 10:52:43


reminds me of cloud with that giant sword... needs a bit of work with the lines, but good for you for trying some bizzare angles... :3


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Response to Keep me alive 2011-02-05 11:53:01


His right arm is too short, it's probably meant to be bent but it's not. Nice attempt at a difficult angle though ; ) Would be a good idea to experiment with line width; heavier in the foreground [so his feet] and lighter in the background [so his head/sword]

good job though! can't wait to see more : )


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Response to Keep me alive 2011-02-05 13:28:30


now that you've mentioned it, his right arm does looks short. anyway I like challenging myself to some crazy perspective, coz I'm not very good at those, so need to practice. I'll probably make another pic of this char with another angel and maybe, if I don't get lazy, i'll put some colors and bg.