Screechy!

I agree with cornandbeans 100%. Everything he said.

And ill cheak out Firestorm or whatnot ^^.

Wow i love it

Cool intro, cool synths, ok drum layout. Yes it's good, but i can see it has more potential.

A more aggresive drum layout, like an IDM drum layout. Raise the BPM a bit, and also clean your synths. EQ them a little more so theres no distortion and a little more stero enhancement. With that done, i would've though that the Crystal Method did this song, seriously. It's that good.

stay up
-Allen aka LeN

:) howdy

hehe, cool intro. Very ambient and screechy. :P You might want to switch up the drums a bit, it gets kinda repetitive.

I like when you come in with the bass thing. I'm not very good at judging industrial tracks, so I'm gonna keep it short, sorry. :|

+ Varied sfx, all of them done very well.
+ Intense, to the point. Steady and powerful.

- repetitive drums, maybe another break or something would do it.
- maybe add some pads to give it melodic depth? I'm not sure if that would take away from the industrialness.

So, good job. I think there's room for improvement, but it's a solid track. Keep up the good work. :)

~cornandbeans

P.S. Mind checking out my new song 'Firestorm'? I'd like to hear your opinion on it. :)