Nice

This totally makes me think of Zelda for some reason.
Anyways, It's really spacey as the reviewers below have said. I like the panning you've done in it.
Keep it up.

-i2 (Paul)

Retro. Space/cave. Good for a menu mebbe.

It kinda reminds me of something from Final Fantasy Legend (Sa.Ga) on the GB. The same repetitive tone and though the instruments here are somewhat better, it's got that same tinny, retro, electronic feel.

I don't actually find this reminding me of sailing ships at all - either a space scene (as the guy below said), or maybe underwater or in a really big cave.

I do really like the way you've got the deep instrument coming in before the high-pitched one. Even though it comes before, it kinda gives it a feeling of an echo or something and a nice resonance. Also, I like the way the high-pitched instrument kinda 'twinkles' before it goes out.

It's all got a nice feel and I found it surprisingly listenable.

It could be cool for a menu screen or something. Maybe I'll use it for the 1D platformer I'm making.

There's a lack of diversity, meaning I wouldn't put it in the actual game, but there's a nice sound here.

My one gripe (apart from the lack of diversity, which kinda makes up the style) is the poor join between the start/end.

hmmm.

It could use a little more diversity but I think it would go nice with some space themed flash I liked the way on how you put background beats to it it was nicely done however I think it could have been looped better.