Lol I love ur username

Seriously? NPC? HAHAHAHA. Sounds like those npcs from those online mmorpg games like Maplestory, WOW, 2moons, CABAL, etc...You now have my favorite username.

Anyway, back on topic: this song is awesome. But you may wanna fix up that bass in the background. It sounds kinda farty or badly EQ'D, or both and gets kinda repetitive at times. Anyway, on the brightside. It has a great melody and synthwork and automations and things and I really love the dreambell fade in near the centre of the song. Great work man. KEEP IT UP!

Hey, did you know that I make techno music too? Do you mind checking it out? ( its all zerobombed) especially check out my newest song called Universal Galaxy.

Nice job

This is awesome. Badass melody at the start. Then it grows into a bright steel drum melody which is very awesome. Great job man, this is awesome!

confused about your genres

Techno is an evil, gritty, machine worshipping genre. This belongs in dance, but near the end it sounds more towards hardstyle. You have greatly confused styles in this song.

You can tell this is a rough mix, hopefully the finished will sound better. Use the fruit kick for a deeper and more driving bass drum as that clicky pre-set drum from the dance folder does not do any justice.

A good effort but it is more than a little rough around the edges.
~BenA.