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AGAINST A GREATER F0RCE

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more sounds.. sumthing im thoroughly happy with

just got a new soundcloud c:

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Needed to change my thoughts, I really like the style. Makes me want to go Racing.

LMMS is an alright program. You should look into Bitwig, it's cross platform and while it does cost money, it's entirely worth it. The free DAWs are ok, but they make you end up doing so much more unnecessary work. FL studio fruity edition is just $99 as well, that would greatly improve your capabilities and tool-set.

Whoops, My Anarchy Symbol!

Ok, References aside, This could use some tuning... And there were a couple missed opportunities.

Didn't expect that clip in the first place. I like opening the song with that. Good! I feel like more clips could have been used to build the theme of the song, Building against insurmountable or Immeasurable odds. "Against a Greater Force", as it were.

I like the attempt at using the Daytona USA OST. That's a banger and the artificial nature of all the lyrics in that song is ripe for sampling. Although I feel like it was underused - But not that the song needed more of it, It should have been tuned more and perhaps thrown through stutter loops, Make it a part of the percussion.

The second half of the song is the largest missed opportunity. The Build-up with the voice clip used should absolutely have been something to peak the audio with fifty bass-boosted drumlines and shit - You know, Like Sewerslvt's "Ecifircas", Where the Moral Orel sample builds for the whole song, and when Clay breaks down with the "NO! YOU! DON'T!" The song goes apeshit, Or at least, Now has the sample-buildup prerequisite to feel like it's absolutely apeshit and bleeding on the floor having a euphoric mental breakdown.

You know. The vibe that Sewerslvt goes for.

Overall - 7.7/10. The banger is there - It just needs a good dosage of Vitamin Ear-rape.

superwagon64 responds:

yeah, i admittedly realy need to use a lot more vocal samples in my songs, its just hard wit my program, lmms, cuz if i have one part of a vocal and then decide i want another, i gotta make a whole new track for it, which discourages me from doing a lot in general lol. i got a couple songs in lmms i wanna finish first and then i think ill try moving over to reaper and hopefully it will give me a lot more power

as for the 2nd half, i know exactly what u saying, "ecifircas" is actually 1 of my top fav sewerslvt songs. but for this song i didnt really feel like doing sumthing that crazy, just felt more like doing sumthing more bouncy n fun with the footwork vibe. but trust me, i totally wanna go deep into that realm of crazyass loud visceral noise type stuff lol, i just gotta get more confident in going full-on with that sound. always learning

thank u so much for getting my music n criticism

Credits & Info

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Score
4.21 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 4, 2021
7:41 PM EST
Genre
Dance
File Info
Song
9.2 MB
4 min 2 sec
Software
  • LMMS

Licensing Terms

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* Contains third-party samples.
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