I think you wanted the bass to take up a lot of space which it does, but I think just some kind of percussive element or sound effect would take it's place better. Many people preach about how stereo bass is bad for the soul, maybe try to switch it to mono to bleed out the drone with other layered gimmicks. Beyond that, I feel like this can use a lead instrument or at least rhythmic chords.
Author Comments
I've allowed downloads on this song. Please, for the love of sanity, don't distribute the file. Distribute the link. If you distribute the file to people, that gives way for source confusion and misuse. Also, if you'd credit me if you put it in anything like a game or a movie, that'd be well appreciated. Thank you!
Not feeling 100% for this one, to be honest. Bass is a bit too rumbly, and I'm not too confident on the synths and the arrangement. Today wasn't a good creativity day, so I ended up finishing up an old scrap I had. At least I'm uploading on time! Enjoy.
This is day 21!
Rate this, please! I wanna know how I did. Descriptions too; Even the smallest description alongside your rating goes a very long way.
If you find something wrong with the mix, do let me know. Feedback is welcome!
I used:
FL Studio (and many FL Studio native plugins and samples)
https://www.image-line.com/flstudio/
Rhythm Lab Vinyl Revolution Volume 1-3 (Drums)
Voxengo SPAN (End-of-mix analysis)
Dumb info:
Song idea 473
128 bpm
I used 23 channel rack plugins, 10 timeline tracks, and 18 mixer tracks.
The song is 202 bars long.
4 hours and 23 minutes have been spent on this project, between the original idea some-odd years ago and today.
As per the CC license, you may use this in movies and games, but please credit me appropriately. I'd appreciate being contacted as well, so I can see what my music's been included in!
Etc. Info:
Discord: https://discord.gg/uzacstY
Join up if you have something to talk about! I'm always available to talk there.
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
im-leia 
Licensing Terms
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:
- Attribution:
- You must give credit to the artist.
- Noncommercial:
- You may not use this work for commercial purposes. *
- Share Alike:
*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.
** Contains third-party samples.
Excercise caution when using it, refer to author comments / contact the author for details.
