New version. Shorter , new music and no overamped vocals
Cool
Well kind of simular to the other one, but still notbad if you ask me, I think the vocals still need more focus maybe even slowing it down just a tad, the backround music was a nice touch though.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More focus on the vocals.
~X~
Satan!
I'm almost tempted to give you something to preach over. The music isn't bad..but the vocals are way off for the music. You said you are working with what you got. The beginning sounded like a Sum 41 song (musically) or something.
Anyways.
Ok...
Well, the music is good, but I think the tone of voice doesn't really fit in with the music. To use a voice like such you should have much louder and more brutal music, in my opinion. Keep workin!
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I´ll try to make the best out of the music software I use but it´s not that easy to produce the right sound. But thanks for your opinion I´ll try and work some more on all of my pieces.
Horns raised to the dark sky !!!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Frostvind666 
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