This isn't getting the exposure it deserves, only 152 listens? this should have a score way higher than 2.08. Fav'ed, Keep it up, I'm going to check out some of your other stuff.
Stuff like this is why I love the audio portal.
Great melodic transitions! Have you compressed the master track? The only thing I think it could use is a shift in the sound production to make it sound more like a whole. The individual tracks seem so separate from each other.. See if a compressor helps at all.
I'm not sure I understand you what you mean by 'seperate'. Maybe because the first synth has air effects all over it? It was sorta done on purpose to enphasize the smoother chorus(i guess) section. What should compressed?
& thanks for feedback yo.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.