I ain't no music nerd, but I'm jammin'.

Parts I liked. 0:36 to 1:19

0:00 - 0:35 is rough, but in the context of 0:58, it makes sense. So I'm torn here. Maybe a simple alteration of the beat and the bass would help? Run another pass by me with an edit, if you feel like it. Oh, also maybe lower the snare type samples by 0.2** dB or so.

Everything before 37 seconds sounds like a lower quality than most of your other songs. The melody is dull and uneventful. The songs uses too much looping in general and needs polishing.
The 0:37 to 0:56 part is the best part with a cool melody even if it was looped with a different instrument, it fit the genre best there.