ZzzzzZZZzz

sorry to say, but this is very boring, not to mention plain as well. the two beats you added(well not even beats) don't mix in well.
shitty beat=shitty sounds=shitty music.

...-.-

dissapointed...wasnt really a beat its was just the same sounds repeated...boring reeaaally quickly...but good effort for trying don't get put down by anyone and keep trying to get better ^.^ practise makes perfect mate ;]