Decent
~~REVIEW~~
Hmm this was interesting and it does show some good effort on your part the "VOCALS" could use some fine tunning but thats just with time, but for the most part you have it down, and you did bring it together, i love the music part of it aswell especially at the start allthough seemed abit slow maybe speed up the begenning of it just a bit, so with all that and suggested its was notbad, but could use more effort.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the beginning was a bit slow speed it up abit, also vocals are great here on this but could be fine tuned