the clipping sucks

Wow ! Really amased track !

Sounds a bit weird in some spots but pretty good not going to lie

Ayo the pizza here

Ou nia...*falling, breaking lots of bones*

ahaa.. my ears burn

(Lesson 1: Don't clip. Clip only if you do a hardcore or extratone.)

you need to make sure that nothing in the song is not clipping. It's not pleasing to the ears, just saying.
It's also a bit repetitive. Some repetition is nice in this type of music, but not too much of it.
A riser leading to the drop would be nice, just to sort of build up some tension right before the drop hits.
For some reason, everything sounds supercompressed. It almost sounds like you put a soundgoodizer or a sausage fattener on the master channel.
Overall, I think this song has some really nice melodies, it's just really repetitive imo.
Good job! :]