So good O:

0:00 Ooh nice riffs on the bottom there. Very melodic. Nice melody you're using
0:14 Layering is good. Giving me epic vibes. Got some cool stuff going on.
0:25 I wish the drums here were a bit punchier, they feel a bit "woolly" and rough. To complete the punchiness and epicness of the melody. I'm not quite sure the sample selection is optimal.
1:03 But the melodies are keeping me going. They are very candy nice.
1:13 I think the build up here needs to be a little more dramatic. Since the kick doesn't have much high end you can barely hear it speeding up.
1:37 This is a really nice melody though!
1:43 Competing melodies. Somehow if you could find a way to separate them in the mix I think that could be good.
1:57 But the melodies themselves are quite strong! They do feel a bit "layered on" though, so to speak.
2:11 OOH the harmonies here are quite nice. I like it.
2:22 I'm not sure how they drop out like that halfway though. It feels a little weird
2:35 Yet again the drums are the thing letting it down. It's okay though because I'm still enjoying myself.

Overall I think this was a bunch of great melodies and nice vibes perhaps let down by slightly lackluster drum selection and a kick that doesn't have enough high end to warrant the drop in the middle. Towards the end, the melodies started to conflict in a way that I didn't find pleasing. However, I feel like this track could be better if polished a little more. It probably needs a little variance in "mode" too, so to speak, so it doesn't just seem like elements are being stacked on top of each other.

Thanks for sharing your track, it's got some really nice melodies and some good selections. Keep bringing the awesome work!